office building

[lordofmax]

hello every one here is a new project i start with it week ago but im still confuse about form concept may be becuse i spent 7 days work on it any way i share you some su photo for my design so if any one have a comment pleas let me know and thanks for your time
hussam

[zebedak]

more info please - like whats it for - where is it (context),etc - please go and read the rules for posting

[lordofmax]

ok sorry about few info.........

[lordofmax]

hello again sorry about late..
this is office bullduing
loction in quter,doha
clint want
1- offices
2- services
3-main entrence
4-basement for parking
5- the loction near landmark mall
thats it all ihave
if you need aplan i send it later but now im asking aboutform
thanks

[spadestick]

the form is not great. It will look like every other building in Doha - not special enough. You need a form generator idea and concept.

[Stijn]

We can't just start giving meaningful comments about your form, if you don't have anything meaningful to say about it. What is the concept behind your facades? What is the general idea? Perhaps even an idea of the materials to be used?


ps: about your longer comments: we understand if you can't write fluently english. But I am sure that you know how to use points, commas and capital letters. It helps us to understand better what you write.

[lordofmax]

thanks for your comment , i ll try to keep all what you said in mind ,((the form is not great. It will look like every other building in Doha - not special enough)) thats what i think about my form so i do my best to find my way
ps: i know i am weak in english but this is one of many reason of shareing my work to mange my langug too.
thanks for all comment realy it will help me
hussam

[whita]

well this is gonna be my first post
and mr hussam i never expected to see you in this fourm
i just wnated to ask you why you used sketchup instead 3dmax
as i know you are very good in 3dmax
see you after few days in university

[InArch]

lordofmax, hello and welcome to the forum... hmm, where to start

I'm noticing too much happening, and at the same time not enough. This means you have too many ideas on this "model". The cylinder is the most articulate object, but because of all the other massing it loses strength.

Questions and considerations:
The front door, should is be more dominant? What is the orientation of the building? Do you have a height restriction? How many floors in your current design? Climate control? Passive solar? What are the facade materials? Is outdoor space required (balconies)? What type of company is the building for? The building footprint and site footprint don't match, are you certain you have enough area for the program without reaching the site boundaries? Thoughts on the entrance lobby, multi-story, atrium, space between masses?

I enjoy projects like this one because there is more than enough program to generate a good concept. It looks like your design is split into 2 halves, is one more public than the other? This would begin to organize the plan and also elevation language.

I hope we can assist your design development and offer some good ideas, and also some bad ideas, so you may decide what is best. Continue to provide information asked by other members and update your progress. You may consider posting the SU model so we get a better look.

Welcome to the forum!

[lordofmax]

InArch
thanks for comment,i m glad to hear from you.
first the building hight about five floor 5 meter for each cuse air condition case, and
here is the layout and sketch design for first floor i am still in boundaries so i m posting a layout

nad su file to help undrstand what i m missing in the model ithink i m losing how can i give them asame

look and union of mass so
thanks alot